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2020-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. What do you think are the possible measures that would prevent Coronavirus from spreading into new areas/countries? -The most possible measures are to prevent them from coming to new areas/countries. But, it\'s a very sensitive way for some people. So I think the most way that new areas/countries have to make a lot of strict entry procedures. 2. Do you think it is just right to block Chinese people from entering Korea? Why or why not? -I think it\'s right to block Chinese people from entering Korea. Because, other countries are doing so. And other countries think their people are first. But, Korea can\'t do it. Because Korea doesn\'t have power. 3. What do you think should the Korean government do to protect their people? -Korea is currently giving many masks for their people. But, I think it is very lacking. I find Korea have to provide more hand sanitizers for their people. Ultimately, Korea have to think their people first

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~Teacher Lucy


The most possible measures are to prevent them from coming to new areas/countries.

>>The most possible measure is to prevent them from coming to new areas/countries.

But, it\'s a very sensitive way for some people.

>>CORRECT!

So I think the most way that new areas/countries have to make a lot of strict entry procedures.

>>CORRECT!

I think it\'s right to block Chinese people from entering Korea.

>>CORRECT!

 Because, other countries are doing so.

>>CORRECT!

 And other countries think their people are first.

>> And other countries think their people at first.

But, Korea can\'t do it.

>>CORRECT!

Because Korea doesn\'t have power.

>>CORRECT!
Korea is currently giving many masks for their people.

>>CORRECT!

But, I think it is very lacking.

>>CORRECT!

I find Korea have to provide more hand sanitizers for their people.

>>CORRECT!

Ultimately, Korea have to think their people first

>>CORRECT!

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