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I don\'t think so.
>>CORRECT!
I think it\'s different.
>>CORRECT!
Because, transgender people choose to change sex by their own.
>>Because, transgender people choose to change their sex on their own.
But homosexual people accept their identity as it is not choice.
>>CORRECT!
They want to change their own sex.
>>CORRECT!
But, it has many problems from religiously and socially.
>>But, it has many problems from religious groups and social norms.
So many people don\'t understand the trans people and discriminate against trans people and Ignore trans people.
>> So many people don\'t understand the trans people and discriminate against them and ignore trans people.
When people are born, they can\'t choose their own sex.
>>CORRECT!
So they think transgender people ignore the providence of nature.
>>CORRECT!
They will take transgender people a long time to understand.
>>It will take a long time to understand transgender people .
i also don\'t understand them.
>>I also don\'t understand them.
But even if we don\'t understand them, we have to respect them.
>>CORRECT!
Because they make a choice even though they know a hard time.
>>Because they make a choice even though they know they\'ll have a hard time.
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