Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you have enough time to do the things you want to do in a day?
I don\'t have enough time to do what I want to do.
Because I am taking care of the baby by myself.
But in the evening, I spend about two hours alone.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I think that it\'s never easy to take care of children. I salute you for your sacrifices. Have a day filled with love!~~T.Dee
I don\'t have enough time to do what I want to do.
>>CORRECT!
Because I am taking care of the baby by myself.
>>It\'s because I am taking care of my baby by myself.
But in the evening, I spend about two hours alone.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: But at night, I have my personal time for about two hours.
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