Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Have you ever bought or would you ever buy what you thought was a \"luxury\" good? Why/why not? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Yes. I bought Gucci bag at duty free shop when I leave honeymoon.
I had a troble with the tax at Philiphine and Korean airport because of the bag.
But fourtunately, I passed the airport. I barely got the bag.
But I had used the bag for just 5 years, I have to throw away the bag.
I couln\'t use the bag anylonger because the bag was torn.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. I am sorry to hear you went through all that trouble for a bag that only lasted for five years. I hope the next luxury item you buy would be much more worth its value. ^^ Thank you for sharing your experience once again. Have a wonderful weekend. Stay safe! ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
Yes. I bought Gucci bag at duty-free shop when I leave honeymoon.
>>> Yes. I bought a Gucci bag at a duty-free shop when I left for my honeymoon.
I had a troble with the tax at Philiphine and Korean airport because of the bag.
>>> I had trouble with Customs at the Philippines and Korean airports because of the bag.
But fourtunately, I passed the airport.
>>> But unfortunately, I got through the airport.
I barely got the bag.
>>> CORRECT =)
But I had used the bag for just 5 years, I have to throw away the bag.
>>> CORRECT =)
I couln\'t use the bag anylonger because the bag was torn.
>>> I could not use the bag any longer because the bag was torn.
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