Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Under what circumstances does time pass slowly and under what circumstances does it pass quickly? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
When I see a interesting movie or musical, I feel time pass quickly.
Last week I went to see a musical, \" a man with smile.\"
it took 3 hours to see a musical and the time passed quickly.
But when I play with a my daugher, I fee time pass slowly.
Especially roll playing is hard time for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. Thank you for a well-done homework. ^^ I am glad to know you like musicals. I have heard of \"A Man with a Smile\" or \"The Grinning Man.\" Let\'s talk about it in class some time. Have a good one today. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
When I see a interesting movie or musical, I feel time pass quickly.
>>> When I see an interesting movie or musical, I feel time passes quickly.
Last week I went to see a musical, \" a man with smile.\"
>>> Last week I went to see a musical, \"A Man with a Smile.\"
it took 3 hours to see a musical and the time passed quickly.
>>> It took 3 hours to see the musical and the time passed quickly.
OR>>> The musical lasted for 3 hours but the time passed quickly.
But when I play with a my daugher, I fee time pass slowly.
>>> But when I play with my daughter, I feel time passes slowly.
Especially roll playing is hard time for me.
>>> Especially, role-playing is hard for me.
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