Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
OMEWORK: If you had two extra hours in the day what would you do with them? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I want to write my story in a web for extra two hours. I always think of operating my blog.
so I opened my account of blog, I just posted 2 stories.
My hudsbund have operated his blog for a long time.
So, he has about 1,000 visitors a day and earned 100,000won per month.
I hope to do what he did.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. I hope you could start your blog and gain many visitors.^^ Good luck and wish you all the best for your endeavors. Let\'s talk soon. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I want to write my story in a web for extra two hours.
>>> I want to write my stories on the internet for two extra hours.
I always think of operating my blog.
>>> CORRECT =)
so I opened my account of blog, I just posted 2 stories.
>>> So I opened a blog account but I just posted 2 stories.
My hudsbund have operated his blog for a long time.
>>> My husband has operated/ managed his blog for a long time.
So, he has about 1,000 visitors a day and earned 100,000won per month.
>>> So he has about 1,000 visitors a day and he earns 100,000 won per month.
I hope to do what he did.
>>> CORRECT =)
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