HOMEWORK~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank You An!
~Teacher Lucy
They think marriage and their kids are their weakness.
>>CORRECT!
Unfortunately, that\'s true.
>>CORRECT!
Especially, for [이름] celebrities.
>>CORRECT!
But I think it\'s better to be honest for their fans than to lie.
>>CORRECT!
Because I think it\'s possible change the social to be honest these days.
>>Because I think it\'s a possible change the social networking to be honest these days.
I think having a private life is important.
>>CORRECT!
But many celebrities hope to being famous.
>>CORRECT!
So they will hold their private life secret to become famous.
>>So they will hold their private life secrets to become famous.
And if I\'m celebrity, I also will do that.
>>CORRECT!
Because the goal of person is a successful person.
>>Because the goal of person is to be a successful person.
But I think they should have a private life of their own space and time.
>>CORRECT!
So they should burn their stress.
>>So they should bury their stress.
I find the advantage is that they have achieve their goal and the disadvantage is that they have stress for keeping their being famous
>>I find the advantage is that they have achieve their goal and the disadvantage is that they have stress for keeping their secrets as being famous.
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