HOMEWORK
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Write 3 things you want to have one day.
time to read many books, organic vegetable juice and vegan dessert
What are some of the things that cause cancer? The most serious is genetically modified oranism(GMO).
GMO is known to have two toxins.
One is that proteins that have been mutated by genetic manipulation can cause serious diseases.
The other is due to the mass distribution of the chemical herbicide glyphosate, which is more toxic than defoliant, for GMO cultivation.
On March 20, 2015, the WHO’s World Cancer Institute announced that glyphosate is a carcinogen.
Monsanto, the world\'s largest GMO crop research and development company and the world\'s largest seed company, is currently in dispute.
It makes herbicides of ‘glyphosate’ ingredients and uses them for GMO foods.
There is non GMO yet in grape seed oil or olive oil.
Non-GMO foods can be found at a shop used by vegan.
I hope my writing will help you. ^_^
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Write 3 things you want to have one day.
>> Correct.
time to read many books, organic vegetable juice and vegan dessert
>> I want to have some time to read many books about organic vegetable juice and vegan dessert.
What are some of the things that cause cancer? The most serious is genetically modified oranism(GMO).
>> What are some of the things that cause cancer? The most serious is genetically modified organisms(GMO).
GMO is known to have two toxins.
>> Correct.
One is that proteins that have been mutated by genetic manipulation can cause serious diseases.
>> One example is, proteins that mutated using genetic manipulation can cause serious diseases.
The other is due to the mass distribution of the chemical herbicide glyphosate, which is more toxic than defoliant, for GMO cultivation.
>> The other reason is due to the mass distribution of the chemical herbicide glyphosate, which is more toxic than defoliant, for GMO cultivation.
On March 20, 2015, the WHO’s World Cancer Institute announced that glyphosate is a carcinogen.
>> Correct.
Monsanto, the world\'s largest GMO crop research and development company and the world\'s largest seed company, is currently in dispute.
>> Correct.
It makes herbicides of ‘glyphosate’ ingredients and uses them for GMO foods.
>> Correct.
There is non GMO yet in grape seed oil or olive oil.
>> There is non-GMO yet in grape seed oil or olive oil.
Non-GMO foods can be found at a shop used by vegan.
>> Non-GMO foods can be found in a shop used by vegans.
I hope my writing will help you. ^_^
>> Correct.
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