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I think that the most popular sport in Korea is soccer. It\'s because many people usually enjoy soccer more than other sports. Also, there are many famous soccer players in Korea such as ji sung Park. So Koreans usually like soccer the most.
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>> CORRECT.
>> Or: In my opinion, soccer is the most well-known sport in Korea.
It\'s because many people usually enjoy soccer more than other sports.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It\'s because many people enjoy it more compared to other sports.
Also, there are many famous soccer players in Korea such as ji sung Park.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: There are many popular soccer players in Korea too just like Ji Sung Park.
So Koreans usually like soccer the most.
>> CORRECT.
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