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When I was a child, I picnicked with my family.
We went to a river near my city.
Father fished in the river and mom catched melanian snails.
I and older sister, yonger brother played in the river.
After picnicked, we ate fried fishes and a melanian snail soup.
Have you ever eaten a melanian snail?
It is very delicious!
I recommend you.
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Wow, I would like to try that. ^^
We went to a river near my city.
Father fished in the river and mom catched melanian snails.
I and older sister, yonger brother played in the river.
After picnicked, we ate fried fishes and a melanian snail soup.
Have you ever eaten a melanian snail?
It is very delicious!
I recommend you.
Thank you for sharing such a nice childhood memory, [이름]. ^^
~t. Ally
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When I was a child, I picnicked with my family.
>> When I was a child, I went on a picnic with my family.
We went to a river near my city.
>> CORRECT!
Father fished in the river and mom catched melanian snails.
>> Father fished in the river and mom caught some melanian snails.
I and older sister, yonger brother played in the river.
>> Me and my older sister and younger brother played in the river.
After picnicked, we ate fried fishes and a melanian snail soup.
>> After the picnic, we at fried fish and a melanian snail soup.
Have you ever eaten a melanian snail?
>> CORRECT!
It is very delicious!
>> CORRECT!
I recommend you.
>> I recommend you try it.
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