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2020-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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(Essay) What’s the best way to stop a baby from crying? First, give baby a hug. Second, check the diapers. Third, check the time to drink milk. Fourth, let the child rest in her arms if not everything. The baby talks about the situation by crying. A memory of a baby\'s crying sound helps to stop it.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! You are right babies communicate by crying most of the time. It\'s not easy to make them stop but we should be patient all the time.H ave a good  day!~~T.Dee


First, give baby a hug.

>>First, give the baby a hug.
Second, check the diapers.

>>CORRECT!
Third, check the time to drink milk.

>>Third, check if it\'s time to drink milk.
Fourth, let the child rest in her arms if not everything.

>>Fourth, let the child rest in your arms if  you have tried everything.
The baby talks about the situation by crying.

>>The baby communicates by crying.
A memory of a baby\'s crying sound helps to stop it.

>> A good memory of the baby may help him or her to stop from crying.

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