Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! You are right babies communicate by crying most of the time. It\'s not easy to make them stop but we should be patient all the time.H ave a good day!~~T.Dee
First, give baby a hug.
>>First, give the baby a hug.
Second, check the diapers.
>>CORRECT!
Third, check the time to drink milk.
>>Third, check if it\'s time to drink milk.
Fourth, let the child rest in her arms if not everything.
>>Fourth, let the child rest in your arms if you have tried everything.
The baby talks about the situation by crying.
>>The baby communicates by crying.
A memory of a baby\'s crying sound helps to stop it.
>> A good memory of the baby may help him or her to stop from crying.
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