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2020-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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homework is not fine so i write text today topic is my favorite color my favorite color is purple,white,black,and blue because purple is pretty and my phone clolor is purple white is clean color black is so thick and it looks cool blue is so cool so i love this 5colors

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!

Happy Valentine\'s Day! ^^

Thank you for writing sentences. Good job!


- T. Rina ^^



1. homework is not fine so i write text today topic is my favorite color

>>I wrote a text today about my favorite color.


2.
my favorite color is purple,white,black,and blue because

>> My favorite colors are purple, white, black and blue.


3. purple is pretty and my phone clolor is purple

>> I like purple because it\'s a pretty color. My phone is also purple.


4. white is clean color

>> While is a clean color.


5. black is so thick and it looks cool

>> Black is dark and it looks cool.


6. blue is so cool

>> CORRECT!


7. so i love this 5colors

>> So, I love these five colors.

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