homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Happy Valentine\'s Day! ^^
Thank you for writing sentences. Good job!
- T. Rina ^^
1. homework is not fine so i write text today topic is my favorite color
>>I wrote a text today about my favorite color.
2. my favorite color is purple,white,black,and blue because
>> My favorite colors are purple, white, black and blue.
3. purple is pretty and my phone clolor is purple
>> I like purple because it\'s a pretty color. My phone is also purple.
4. white is clean color
>> While is a clean color.
5. black is so thick and it looks cool
>> Black is dark and it looks cool.
6. blue is so cool
>> CORRECT!
7. so i love this 5colors
>> So, I love these five colors.
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