Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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강사 첨삭
Hi Dasha!
Thank you for your composition today.
Next time, please type you homework on the box, okay?
Files are generally not accepted.
I\'ll make an exception this time.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
not good idea.
>> It\'s not a good idea.
Because The children they can not control self.
>> This is because children cannot control themselves.
My nephew watch just 1 oour TV.
>> My nephew is allowed to watch an hour of television every day.
The adult have to teach how to self control
>> Adults have to teach children how to control themselves.
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