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2020-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

Honestly, I don’t want to be an animal if I were reborn. I rather to choose to be “a puppy” even though I have to choose one. I think that puppies are adorable, sociable and faithful. They get along with people. Sometimes they are better then people. I admire their loyalty. Hello!! I am so glad to meet you here. I wanna say \"thaks\" to you for giving me a great lessons . I have a request. Please give me Grammar homework not an essay. Please~~~~~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]! I appreciate you for still doing this composition. Thanks for reminding me of your request.

No worries, I\'ll be giving you grammar-related homework from here on out. ^^ See you later! ^_^

~T.Avery

Honestly, I don’t want to be an animal if I were reborn.

>> CORRECT
I rather to choose to be “a puppy” even though I have to choose one.

>> I\'d rather choose to be “a puppy” if I have to choose one.

I think that puppies are adorable, sociable and faithful.

>> CORRECT
They get along with people. Sometimes they are better then people.

>> They get along with people. Sometimes they are better than people.
I admire their loyalty.
>> CORRECT
Hello!!
I am so glad to meet you here.

>> CORRECT
I wanna say \"thaks\" to you for giving me a great lessons .

>> I wanna say \"thanks\" to you for giving me great lessons.
I have a request. Please give me Grammar homework not an essay.
Please~~~~~~~~

>> CORRECT

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