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2020-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I think it\'s not bad. I think they can get married for each other\'s benefit. Of course, marriage can be prudent and love is the priority of marriage. But I think these days, you must accept reality life not love. 2. I think it\'s impossible. I think it\'s a very small number even if it\'s possible. People have adapted themselves to the years they has lived. So when they met other person, of course they think it\'s different. I think the difference is making they are willing to embrace each other decision a perfect marriage. Lastly, it\'s difficult get married and realistic.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

I think it\'s not bad.

>>CORRECT!

I think they can get married for each other\'s benefit.

>>CORRECT!

Of course, marriage can be prudent and love is the priority of marriage.

>>CORRECT!

But I think these days, you must accept reality life not love.
>>But I think these days, you must accept life\'s reality not love.
I think it\'s impossible.

>>CORRECT!

I think it\'s a very small number even if it\'s possible.

>>CORRECT!

People have adapted themselves to the years they has lived.

>> People have adapted themselves to the years they have lived.

So when they met other person, of course they think it\'s different.

>>So when they meet another person, of course they think it\'s different.

I think the difference is making they are willing to embrace each other decision a perfect marriage.

>>I think the difference is they are willing to embrace each other\'s decision for a perfect marriage.

Lastly, it\'s difficult get married and realistic.

>> Lastly, marriage is difficult and it\'s the reality.

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