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2020-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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What factor influences you to watch a movie? I like a movie with a twist. So, I like mystery or action movies. And I see who appears when I choose a movie. I like movies what women are the main characters. Because men are main characters in most Korean movie. And their contents are all similar. It feels not funny to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for this. I agree, women protagonists in movies is so empowering.

- T. Beth

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I like a movie with a twist.

>>> correct.

So, I like mystery or action movies.

>>> correct.

>>> OR: for that reason, I am into mystery and action movies.
And I see who appears when I choose a movie.

>>> correct.

>>> OR: In addition, I check out who stars in he movie when I choose a movie to watch.

I like movies what women are the main characters.

>>> I like movies where women are the main characters.

Because men are main characters in most Korean movie.

>>> Because men are main characters in most Korean movies.

And their contents are all similar.

>>> correct.
It feels not funny to me.

>>> It doesn\'t seem fun for me.

>>> OR: I don\'t fidn it fun to watch.

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