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2022-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Raven

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Hi. I didn\'t do my homework yesterday. sorry :-( i\'m in Suwon now because i\'m doing part time job right now. i\'m working my department of university. we\'re doing a lot of business and I\'m basically a desk assistant... like chores. Thank you. Let\'s talk more in today class~~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It\'s okay, I understand your situation. Keep doing your best in everything you do. I\'m just here to help you. :) By the way, you did a fantastic job today in our class. Keep it up! :)


Hi. I didn\'t do my homework yesterday. sorry :-(
>> Hi, I didn\'t do my homework yesterday, sorry. 
i\'m in Suwon now because i\'m doing part time job right now.
>> I\'m in Suwon now because I\'m doing my part time job.
i\'m working my department of university. 
>> I\'m working for our department in the university. 
we\'re doing a lot of business and I\'m basically a desk assistant... like chores.
>> We\'re doing a lot of business transactions and I\'m basically a desk assistant, I do some chores.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
Let\'s talk more in today class~~
>> Let\'s talk more in today\'s class.

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