homework ◡̈
학생이 쓴 원문
My Best Friend
Who\'s your best friend?
- My best friend is Seung you ( i don\'t know her name\'s spelling)
How did you meet?
- we met 15 years old.
What are his/her characteristics that you love the most?
- She is similar to me! (like clothe style and personality)
What are his/her characteristics that you don\'t like the most?
- umm... That she doesn\'t break up with her boyfriend? because he is very unable and pathetic.
What are the activities that you enjoy doing with them?
- Usually, we talk in Cafe
Tell something about him/her using 3 to 4 short paragraphs.
- she is pretty and click with me. her major is Department of Practical Music.
but she quit university. so currently, she is not student.
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- My best friend is Seung you ( i don\'t know her name\'s spelling)
>> Correct. OR My best friend\'s name is Seung You.
How did you meet?
- we met 15 years old.
How did you meet?
- we met 15 years old.
>> We met when we were only 15 years old.
What are his/her characteristics that you love the most?
- She is similar to me! (like clothe style and personality)
What are his/her characteristics that you love the most?
- She is similar to me! (like clothe style and personality)
>> Correct. OR She has very similar clothing style and personality as I do.
What are his/her characteristics that you don\'t like the most?
- umm... That she doesn\'t break up with her boyfriend? because he is very unable and pathetic.
What are his/her characteristics that you don\'t like the most?
- umm... That she doesn\'t break up with her boyfriend? because he is very unable and pathetic.
>> I dislike that she doesn\'t have the guts to break up with her boyfriend because I think he is very careless and pathetic.
What are the activities that you enjoy doing with them?
- Usually, we talk in Cafe
What are the activities that you enjoy doing with them?
- Usually, we talk in Cafe
>> We usually talk in a café.
Tell something about him/her using 3 to 4 short paragraphs.
- she is pretty and click with me. her major is Department of Practical Music.
but she quit university. so currently, she is not student.
Tell something about him/her using 3 to 4 short paragraphs.
- she is pretty and click with me. her major is Department of Practical Music.
but she quit university. so currently, she is not student.
>> She is pretty and our personalities click. She took up Practical Music as her major, however, she quit the university so she is currently not a student.
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