homework ◡̈
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the effects of cyberbullying on the emotional and mental health of people? Tell something about it using 3 to 4 short paragraphs.
People who were attacked a cyberbullying have attention about other people.
No matter how any people have a self-confidence, The people will get to loose self-confidence.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your opinion about cyber bullying, Elic. Please review my corrections and study them carefully. Thank you so much! :)
>> People who were cyber bullied give too much attention to other people.
No matter how any people have a self-confidence, The people will get to loose self-confidence.
No matter how any people have a self-confidence, The people will get to loose self-confidence.
>> Even if a person has self confidence, there will be times that they might lose it.
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