Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I am sorry I forgot to greeting you before lesson.
I am nervous when I had a call from you.
But I think next is better then.
Anyway nice to meet you and nice talking to you.
As I know, there are many foreign people in Korea.
Philippine, Thailand, Vietnam . . .
During 23 years of job, I met many persons from foreign. My boss is from Spain now.
When I was U.K company, I had a chance to meet them. at that time I think if I could speak english well.
So I should have been to make a many foreign friends.
Please check my essay above!!.
Thanks
강사 첨삭
1. As I know, there are many foreign people in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>As far as I know, there are many foreigners in Korea.
2. Philippine, Thailand, Vietnam . . .
>>For example, Filipino, Thai and Vietnamese.
>>For example, Filipino, Thai and Vietnamese.
3. During 23 years of job, I met many persons from foreign.
>>During my 23 years of job, I have met many foreigners.
>>During my 23 years of job, I have met many foreigners.
4. My boss is from Spain now.
>>My boss now is from Spain.
>>My boss now is from Spain.
5. When I was U.K company, I had a chance to meet them.
>>When I was in our U.K office, I had a chance to meet them.
>>When I was in our U.K office, I had a chance to meet them.
6. at that time I think if I could speak english well.
>>At that time, I thought I should\'ve known how to speak English well.
>>At that time, I thought I should\'ve known how to speak English well.
7. So I should have been to make a many foreign friends.
>>So that I could\'ve made a lot of foreigner friends.
>>So that I could\'ve made a lot of foreigner friends.
Oh, it\'s alright. I had fun talking with you.
Just ask me any questions about English. I am willing to help you wit it.
Talk to you soon!
Just ask me any questions about English. I am willing to help you wit it.
Talk to you soon!
-T. Melody ^^
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