homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I’d like to improve my English interview skills. This is very first time to prepare an English interview. So I’m not familiar with interview words. I‘d like to learn more words. And I’m impressive with teacher’s laughing voice. It sounds energetic and make me joyful. Now and for ever tech me like this!
강사 첨삭
Hi Gonnie!
I had fun on our first class.
Don\'t worry, we will work on your skills together.
Our class would be both fun and productive.
I look forward to our future lessons.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I’d like to improve my English interview skills.
>> I’d like to improve my skills for an English interview.
This is very first time to prepare an English interview.
>> This is my very first time to prepare for an English interview.
So I’m not familiar with interview words.
>> That\'s why I\'m not familiar with words that I can use for an interview.
I‘d like to learn more words.
>> Correct
And I’m impressive with teacher’s laughing voice.
>> I\'m impressed with the laugh in my teacher\'s voice.
It sounds energetic and make me joyful.
>> It sounds energetic and it makes me joyful.
Now and for ever tech me like this!
>> Please teach me this way now and forever.
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