homework
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When was the last time you went to the dentist?
- i cannot remember well about the last time though i guess about 1years half ago. i went there for getting treatment cavity.
Do you like going there?
- i really hate dentist the most than other hospital. Because it\'s really hurt and the sound is so terrible! Also, dentist smells medical alcohol... so dentist is the most hate places to me.
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i cannot remember well about the last time though i guess about 1years half ago.
>>I can\'t remember the last time but I guess it was about a year and a half ago.
i went there for getting treatment cavity.
>>I went there to get treatment for my cavity.
i really hate dentist the most than other hospital.
>>I really hate going to the dentist more than other hospitals.
Because it\'s really hurt and the sound is so terrible!
>>It really hurts and it sounds terrible!
Also, dentist smells medical alcohol... so dentist is the most hate places to me.
>>Also, the dentist smells like medical alcohol.
>> So, the dentist is one of the places I hate the most.
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