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I enjoy traveling. So sometimes I go abroad. Then I have to communicate with them, but I don\'t know English well and I don\'t have confidence, so I try to rely on others or speak only words So I want to do well in English. for the freedom of travel
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Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for this. It is really necessary to speak the international language when one plans to travel to different parts of the world. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I enjoy traveling. >>> correct
So sometimes I go abroad.
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Then I have to communicate with them, but I don\'t know English well and I don\'t have confidence, so I try to rely on others or speak only words So I want to do well in English. for the freedom of travel
>>> Then I have to communicate with foreigners, but I can\'t speak English well and I don\'t have confidence. As a result, I try to rely on others or speak only words. This is why I want to do well in speaking English so I could travel freely.
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