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2020-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I haven\'t been able to take a nap until now because I went to work, but now that I\'m retired, I have more time at home. Especially when I have to stay at home because of the coronal virus, like these days, when I am at home, I tend to play computer a lot and s[이름]p because my eyes are tired. After an hour or two, I can\'t s[이름]p well at night. So I will try not to take a nap as much as possible because I do not s[이름]p at night and s[이름]p late in the morning.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. 
- T. Beth
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I haven\'t been able to take a nap until now because I went to work, but now that I\'m retired, I have more time at home. 
>>>> correct                  
Especially when I have to stay at home because of the coronal virus, like these days, when I am at home, I tend to play computer a lot and s[이름]p because my eyes are tired. 
>>>> Especially when I have to stay at home because of the coronal virus like these days, when I am at home I tend to play computer a lot and s[이름]p because my eyes are tired.   
After an hour or two, I can\'t s[이름]p well at night. 
>>>> correct   
So I will try not to take a nap as much as possible because I do not s[이름]p at night and s[이름]p late in the morning.
>>>>  So I will try not to take a nap as much as possible because I wouldn\'t be able to s[이름]p at night and s[이름]p late in the morning. 

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