homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that education should be provided for free until high school. Because all students should take classes for life basically.
It is good investment to give education for free in the long run to both students and nation.
After graduation high school, whether they go to the University is their choice. However, government has to expand scholarship for students from low-income families.
강사 첨삭
I definitely agree with your statement, Bo [이름].
There are, however, countries that have implemented your points and they\'re striving.
Let\'s just hope that our countries would do the same.
~Teacher Eve.
I think that education should be provided for free until high school.
>> Correct!
Because all students should take classes for life basically.
>> Because all students should take classes for life, basically.
It is good investment to give education for free in the long run to both students and nation.
>> It is a good investment to give education for free in the long run to both the students and the nation.
After graduation high school, whether they go to the University is their choice.
>> After graduating high school, whether they go to the University or not, it\'s their choice.
However, government has to expand scholarship for students from low-income families.
>> However, the government has to extend the scholarship for students from low-income families.
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