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학생이 쓴 원문
I think that inner beauty is most important.
A person of a great inner beauty is able to have a face of good impression.
It can determin someone\'s beauty.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. ^^
A person of a great inner beauty is able to have a face of good impression.
It can determin someone\'s beauty.
Thank you for making a composition!
I believe in what you said.
Inner beauty is more important than a person\'s superficial appearance. ^^
~t. Ally
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I think that inner beauty is most important.
>> I think that inner beauty is most the important.
A person of a great inner beauty is able to have a face of good impression.
>> A person of great inner beauty is able to have a face of good impression.
It can determin someone\'s beauty.
>> It can determine someone\'s beauty.
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