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2020-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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What’s A Common Thing That You Think About When You’re Alone? -- When i\'m alone, i usually think about food and active like what do i eat for lunch, dinner and what do i do now. Doing something and eating is important to me, so i always think about these!

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When i\'m alone, i usually think about food and active like what do i eat for lunch, dinner and what do i do now. 
>>When I\'m alone, I usually think about food like what to eat for lunch or dinner and things I should be doing nw.

Doing something and eating is important to me, so I always think about these!
>>CORRECT

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