homework
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ESSAY: Please share your thoughts about this question: Your house, containing everything you own, catches fire. After saving your loved ones and pets, you have time to safely make a final dash to save any one item. What would it be? Why?
It is hard to choose one. I will definately choose my pets. Actually, I anmd my roommate talked about this.
Nobody will save them so we weill sva them first. And one more promise that one person should be alive to take care of them.
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It is hard to choose one.
>> CORRECT
I will definately choose my pets.
>> I will definitely choose my pets.
Actually, I anmd my roommate talked about this.
>> CORRECT
Nobody will save them so we weill sva them first.
>> Nobody will save them so we will save them first.
And one more promise that one person should be alive to take care of them.
>> We also promised that at least one person should be alive to take care of them.
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