homework
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: Please answer this question: What would constitute a “perfect” day for you?
I think every day that I had is the perfect days for me. Sometimes I have troubles but it is also special for me.
It makes me strong and better. And because of that, I can be thankful for the better days.
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I think every day that I had is the perfect days for me.
>>I think every day that I had are all perfect days for me.
Sometimes I have troubles but it is also special for me.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Sometimes I experience troubled times but they\'re still special for me.
It makes me strong and better. And because of that, I can be thankful for the better days.
>> CORRECT
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