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What’s The Best Way To Spend A Rainy Afternoon?
--The best way to spend a rainy afternoon is staying at home. And then, i drink a cup of coffee and listen the smooth music like Jazz while opening the window. These make me feel relaxed and cozy.
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Hello there April~
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Have a nice day ahead!
The best way to spend a rainy afternoon is staying at home.
>>CORRECT
And then, i drink a cup of coffee and listen the smooth music like Jazz while opening the window.
>>We can have a cup of coffee and listen to smooth music like Jazz while keeping the window open.
These make me feel relaxed and cozy.
>>CORRECT
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