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2011-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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hello. please inform me the words you were going to say, but i could not understnad during class in the morning. and thanks for your advice on get over guy. i will try it sometime. 1. Adjective choices: wet, green, floppy, many The dog had a ______wet_____________ nose and ________floopy___________ ears. 2. Adjective choices: tall, cold, spicy, yellow The sunflowers in my backyard are _________tall__________ and ______yellow_____________. 3. Adjective choices: five, delicious, shiny, busy I found a ____five_____________ quarter lying outside on the ___________shiny______ sidewalk! 4. Adjective choices: blue, striped, sharp, frozen The _________striped__________ tiger had _______sharp____________ teeth. 5. Adjective choices: dull, sandy, hot, cheesy We all ate the _____hot______________, ______chessy_____________ pizza. 6. Adjective choices: (healthy, warm, toasty, many) The refrigerator was packed with _______many____________ ________healthy___________ foods.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for spending some of your time answering your homework and leaving a short message for me. I  really appreciate it. ^^, I hope that you will continue to write something in your composition board. And regarding our class, don\'t worry because I will spell out and give the meaning of every word you find new to you or a little bit confusing. Just let me know all your queries and I will gladly respond to it. You know what, you impressed me with your courage to face a broken relationship. I just hope that time will settle everything on their proper places. By the way, I made some modifications in your letter. The answer key is also given below. Please read and study the following: hello. >> Hello! (Capitalization, Punctuation Mark)please inform me the words you were going to say, but i could not understnad during class in the morning. >> Please give me the meaning and spelling of some words which I cannot understand during our class in the morning. OR YOU CAN SAY >> Please explain to me some words which I cannot understand during our class in the morning. (Capitalization, Word choice, Sentence Construction) and thanks for your advice on get over guy. >> I would like to thank you for your advice on getting over a guy. (Sentence Construction) i will try it sometime.>> I will try it sometime. (Capitalization)1. Adjective choices: wet, green, floppy, manyThe dog had a wet nose and floopy ears. >> Correct! :) Wonderful!2. Adjective choices: tall, cold, spicy, yellowThe sunflowers in my backyard are tall and yellow. >> Correct! :) Very good!3. Adjective choices: five, delicious, shiny, busyI found a five quarter lying outside on the shiny sidewalk! >> I found a shiny quarter lying outside on the busy sidewalk!4. Adjective choices: blue, striped, sharp, frozenThe striped tiger had sharp teeth. >> Correct! :) Nice!5. Adjective choices: dull, sandy, hot, cheesyWe all ate the hot, chessy pizza. >> Correct! :) Brilliant!6. Adjective choices: (healthy, warm, toasty, many)The refrigerator was packed with many healthy foods. >> Correct! :) Great!   See you tomorrow my dear student! Please take care! ~Always, Teacher Lorraine ^^, 

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