homework

2020-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

Please re-write the following sentences using proper punctuations: 1. The news however came as a shock. The news however came as a shock. 2. I love stranger things, it\'s the best. I love stranger things. It\'s the best. 3. Pass the rolls: I\'m really hungry. Pass the rolls! I\'m really hungry. 4. My mom who lives in Utah is visiting. My mom who lives in Utah is visiting. 5. Her favorite colors are: purple, blue and green. Her favorite colors are purple, blue and green.

강사 첨삭

Awesome Tuesday, Ms. [이름]! Below are some corrections. Please take note how commas are placed in sentences 1 and 4.
Thanks so much for your homework. Great work! ^^
~T.Avery
1. The news however came as a shock.
The news however came as a shock.
>> The news, however, came as a shock.
2. I love stranger things, it\'s the best.
I love stranger things. It\'s the best.
>> CORRECT
3. Pass the rolls: I\'m really hungry.
Pass the rolls! I\'m really hungry.
>> CORRECT
4. My mom who lives in Utah is visiting.
My mom who lives in Utah is visiting.
>> My mom, who lives in Utah, is visiting.
5. Her favorite colors are: purple, blue and green.
Her favorite colors are purple, blue and green. 
>> CORRECT

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