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2020-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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We can learn from babies. So they haven\'t prejudice about people. Adults sometimes discriminate that people are how much educated or family background is how good.

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Hi, [이름]! ^^ 


Thank you for sharing this. 
I agree with your composition. ^^ 

~t. Ally


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We can learn from babies.
>> CORRECT!

So they haven\'t prejudice about people.
>> They don\'t have any prejudice about people.

Adults sometimes discriminate that people are how much educated or family background is how good.
>> Adults sometimes discriminate people with regards to how educated they are or about their family\'s background.

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