homework
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What is the best solution for the rapid infection in Korea?
--Basically, we need to wash our hands after going outside and wear a mask when you go out. In my opinion, for prevent the rapid infection, all people should refrain from going out as much as possible during a week at least. Also, the Korea government should provide as many masks as possible to citizens. If we do this, we will be able to prevent the secondary infected people.
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Basically, we need to wash our hands after going outside and wear a mask when you go out.
>>Basically, we need to wash our hands after going outside and wear a mask whenever we go out.
In my opinion, for prevent the rapid infection, all people should refrain from going out as much as possible during a week at least.
>>In my opinion, to prevent the rapid infection, everyone should refrain from going out as much as possible during a weak at least.
Also, the Korea government should provide as many masks as possible to citizens.
>>Also, the Korean government should provide as many masks as possible to citizens.
If we do this, we will be able to prevent the secondary infected people.
>>If we do this, we will be able to prevent the secondary infection of people.
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