Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I preper reading books than watching movies.
There is two reasons.
First, Books have more useful impormation than movies.
Second, With Reading Books, I can improve thinking skills.
강사 첨삭
1. I preper reading books than watching movies.
2. There is two reasons.
3. First, Books have more useful impormation than movies.
>>I prefer reading books than watching movies.
>>There are two reasons.
>>First, books have more useful information than movies.
4. Second, With Reading Books, I can improve thinking skills.
>>Second, with reading books, I can improve my thinking skills.
Nice sentences.
- T. Melody ^^
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