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2020-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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(Essay) Do you prefer writing or typing? I like typing. Because if I hold a pen, my fingers hurt and my handwriting is not pretty. The batter writes fast and the fingers hurt less. And i can use pretty handwriting. keywords 1. avenue - I walked across the Garosu-gil avenue. 2. mention - Don\'t forget to mention to wash her hands. 3. office - I want to have my one office. 4. station - My house is handily placed for the subway station. 5. town - I want to traval to another town.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your composition. Check below for the corrections. Have a great day!~~T.Dee

I like typing.
>>CORRECT!
Because if I hold a pen, my fingers hurt and my handwriting is not pretty.
>>CORRECT!
The batter writes fast and the fingers hurt less.
>>Using the computer is faster and my fingers hurt less.
And i can use pretty handwriting.
>>And, I can chose a pretty font style.

keywords
1. avenue

- I walked across the Garosu-gil avenue.
>>CORRECT!
2. mention
- Don\'t forget to mention to wash her hands.
>>CORRECT!
3. office
- I want to have my one office.
>>I want to have my own office.
4. station
- My house is handily placed for the subway station.
>>My house is conveniently located near the subway station.
5. town
- I want to traval to another town.  
>>I want to travel to another town.

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