Homework:

2020-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

(Essay) What kinds or methods of learning do you like best? I like to read a book once and organize the contents in type. And it is good to learning to read and organize the contents of i typing. Keyword 1.international - The Coronavirus is an international problem. 2. local - Director Bong Joon-ho called the Oscars \"they\'re very local\". 3. nearby - There are two subway station nearby my house. 4. news - These days, only corona stories come out in the news. - I hope to hear good news very soon. 5. straight - Come straight home after school.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your composition. Check below for the corrections. Have a great day!~~T.Dee
 

I like to read a book once and organize the contents in type.
>>I like to read a book once and then I organize its the contents by typing it.
And it is good to learning to read and organize the contents of i typing.

>>It is good method of learning when I read and organize the contents when I type it.

Keyword
1.international

- The Coronavirus is an international problem.
>>CORRECT!
2. local
- Director Bong Joon-ho called the Oscars \"they\'re very local\".
>>CORRECT!
3. nearby
- There are two subway station nearby my house.
>>CORRECT!
4. news
- These days, only corona stories come out in the news.
>>These days, only things about the corona virus come out in the news.
- I hope to hear good news very soon.
>>CORRECT!
5. straight
- Come straight home after school. 
>>CORRECT!

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