Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) What are the good and bad things about travelling?
The advantage of traveling is that you can go to new places.
The bad things of traveling is that it costs a lot of money.
But planning a trip is always happy.
keywords
1. before
- I wash my hands before touching my baby.
2. behind
- My car is behind the parking lot.
3. front
- The park is in front of the apartment.
4. start
- Always start your day happy.
5. workplace
- I\'m passionate about my work place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your composition. Check below for the corrections. Have a great day!~~T.Dee
The advantage of traveling is that you can go to new places.
>>CORRECT!
- I\'m passionate about my work place.
The bad things of traveling is that it costs a lot of money.
>>CORRECT!
But planning a trip is always happy.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: But, for me, making plans for a trip is exciting
keywords
1. before
- I wash my hands before touching my baby.
>>CORRECT!
2. behind
- My car is behind the parking lot.
>>CORRECT!
3. front
- The park is in front of the apartment.
>>CORRECT!
4. start
- Always start your day happy.
>>CORRECT!
5. workplace- I\'m passionate about my work place.
>>CORRECT!
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