Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you ever worry about your own mental health?
I always worry about my mental health.
Because I know it is hard if your mind is not healthy.
So I always check my mental health.
keywords
1.Band-Aid
- I always have a band-aid.
2. cut
- I have my hand a paper cut.
3. dangerous
- It is dangerous to leave a baby alone.
4. finger
- I have a finger doll.
5. hurt
- I was run over by the baby walker and hurt.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your composition. Check below for the corrections. Have a great day!~~T.Dee
I always worry about my mental health.
>>CORRECT!
Because I know it is hard if your mind is not healthy.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: It\'s because I know that it\'s not easy to live if your mind is unstable.
So I always check my mental health.
>>CORRECT!
keywords
1.Band-Aid
- I always have a band-aid.
>>CORRECT!
2. cut
- I have my hand a paper cut.
>>I have a paper cut on my hand.
3. dangerous
- It is dangerous to leave a baby alone.
>>CORRECT!
4. finger
- I have a finger doll.
>>CORRECT!
5. hurt- I was run over by the baby walker and hurt.
>>I was run over by the baby walker and it hurts.
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