Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you think being a hair stylist is a good job?
Yes, I do.
Because a job as a hair stylist should have creative ability.
They help express a person\'s personality.
So I want to learn hair technique.
But it is very difficult.
I once made a mess by cutting a baby\'s hair.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! It think your triend your best and don\'t worry because your baby will nor remember the mess you made. ~~T.Dee
Yes, I do.
>>CORRECT!
Because a job as a hair stylist should have creative ability.
>>
They help express a person\'s personality.
>>CORRECT!
So I want to learn hair technique.
>>This is why I want to learn some hair styling techniques.
But it is very difficult.
>>CORRECT!
I once made a mess by cutting a baby\'s hair.
>>I once made a mess when I was cutting my baby\'s hair.
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