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1.
East Asian countries including Korea, it is the number of infected people with coronavirus has started going down.
Even though initial suppression failed, Korea getting better in stages. Korea is possible to check infected person in six hours.
And Korea is using the drive-throw which is checking for driver on the road.
And Korea is chasing infected people\'s a moving route and someone contacted with a infected person.
But other countries that are defenseless from the coronavirus, that is increasing infected people now. Especially, The USA\'s doctors urrently use the Korean data models. So I think Korea is going in a good direction.
2.
I think the most effective way is the government\'s active support and the high civic consciousness.
For example, the government should give free masks for the poor and the elderly.
And, the citizens should use a mask and wash their hands every day.
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~Teacher Lucy
East Asian countries including Korea, it is the number of infected people with coronavirus has started going down.
>>East Asian countries including Korea the number of infected people with coronavirus has started going down.
Even though initial suppression failed, Korea getting better in stages.
>>Even though initial suppression failed, Korea is getting better in stages.
Korea is possible to check infected person in six hours.
>>CORRECT!
And Korea is using the drive-throw which is checking for driver on the road.
And Korea is using the drive-throw which is checking for driver on the road.
>>CORRECT!
And Korea is chasing infected people\'s a moving route and someone contacted with a infected person.
And Korea is chasing infected people\'s a moving route and someone contacted with a infected person.
>>And Korea is chasing infected people\'s route and someone contacted with an infected person.
But other countries that are defenseless from the coronavirus, that is increasing infected people now.
>>CORRECT!
Especially, The USA\'s doctors urrently use the Korean data models.
>> Especially, The USA\'s doctors currently use the Korean data models.
So I think Korea is going in a good direction.
>>CORRECT!
I think the most effective way is the government\'s active support and the high civic consciousness.
>>CORRECT!
For example, the government should give free masks for the poor and the elderly.
For example, the government should give free masks for the poor and the elderly.
>>CORRECT!
And, the citizens should use a mask and wash their hands every day.
And, the citizens should use a mask and wash their hands every day.
>>And, the citizens should use masks and wash their hands every day.
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