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Homework –Essay Question
Answer the following in full sentences. Which greeting kind of annoys you
When I walk on the street, sometimes a stranger come to me and greet me. They approach me to sell something or to propagate heresy. And they keep following me greeting. then I feel annoyed.
Writing Task: Do people in your country usually greet their friends with hugs and kisses? Please explain your answer.
People in my country usually don’t greet with hugs and kisses. Those are not common way to greet in Korea. But some parents greet their children with kisses and between friends they sometimes hug when they see after long time.
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Book: Homework
When I walk on the street, sometimes a stranger come to me and greet me.
>>When I walk down the street, sometimes strangers greet me.
They approach me to sell something or to propagate heresy.
>>CORRECT!
OR: They approach me to sell me something or propagate heresy.
And they keep following me greeting. then I feel annoyed.
>>They keep following and I feel annoyed.
>>When I walk down the street, sometimes strangers greet me.
They approach me to sell something or to propagate heresy.
>>CORRECT!
OR: They approach me to sell me something or propagate heresy.
And they keep following me greeting. then I feel annoyed.
>>They keep following and I feel annoyed.
Writing Task: Do people in your country usually greet their friends with hugs and kisses? Please explain your answer.
People in my country usually don’t greet with hugs and kisses.
>>These are not common greetings in Korea.
But some parents greet their children with kisses and between friends they sometimes hug when they see after long time.
>>But some parents greet their children with kisses and between friends they sometimes hug after they haven\'t seen them for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
OR: Koreans don\'t usually greet each other with hugs and kisses.
Those are not common way to greet in Korea.>>These are not common greetings in Korea.
But some parents greet their children with kisses and between friends they sometimes hug when they see after long time.
>>But some parents greet their children with kisses and between friends they sometimes hug after they haven\'t seen them for a long time.
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