Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I save my money for some time in the future.
I am afraid for the future.
So, I don\'t spend money too much.
And I am interest in increasing money like stock.
Conclusionly, I spend money on necessary things, Don\'t spend too much. And study about how to increasing money.
강사 첨삭
1. I save my money for some time in the future.
2. I am afraid for the future.
4. And I am interest in increasing money like stock.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I save my money for future time.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m nervous about the future.
3. So, I don\'t spend money too much.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, I don\'t spend too much money.
4. And I am interest in increasing money like stock.
>>And, I am interested in increasing my money like investing in stock.
5. Conclusionly, I spend money on necessary things, Don\'t spend too much.
>>In conclusion, I spend money on necessary things and don\'t spend too much.
6. And study about how to increasing money.
>>And, I study on how to increase money.
Good sentences.
- T. Melody^^
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