Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Writing Task: What bad habits bother you the most? Make a short essay about this.
My bad habit is that I look at the mobile phone all the time when I have short free time. Habitually, I check out what is updated and search online. I am updated through online continually and that makes me stressful and tired. In other words, my brain is always awake without resting. It\'s a very bad habit.
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>>My bad habit is that I look at my mobile phone all the time when I have a short free time.
Habitually, I check out what is updated and search online.
>>CORRECT
I am updated through online continually and that makes me stressful and tired.
>>I am updated online continually and that makes me stressed and tired.
In other words, my brain is always awake without resting.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In other words, my brain is always awake and not resting.
It\'s a very bad habit.
>>CORRECT
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