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I saw notice in homepage about the coronavirus
Take care Lucy!!
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My government had the death penalty system. But my government don\'t actually kill criminals. If there are people who jeopardize public health in Korea, they are to be sentenced to prison. But Korean people are not satisfied about their low penal servitude for a time. And my government\'s judge almost punish criminals weaker than the prosecution. Criminals emphasize sympathy and personality trait for Korean judges. These reasons make their penal servitude low. So our country people envy the American style of punishment. And I think my government is a good country for criminals.
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Hi AN!
You\'re right! We need to follow the advisory which is \"Enhance community quarantine\". :) Moreover, we are safe. :) Please be careful, too. :)
~Lucy
My government had the death penalty system.
>>CORRECT!
But my government don\'t actually kill criminals.
>>CORRECT!
If there are people who jeopardize public health in Korea, they are to be sentenced to prison.
>>If there are people who jeopardize public health in Korea, they are to be sentenced in prison.
But Korean people are not satisfied about their low penal servitude for a time.
>>CORRECT!
And my government\'s judge almost punish criminals weaker than the prosecution.
>>CORRECT!
Criminals emphasize sympathy and personality trait for Korean judges.
>>CORRECT!
These reasons make their penal servitude low.
>>CORRECT!
So our country people envy the American style of punishment.
>>So people in our country envy the American style of punishment.
And I think my government is a good country for criminals.
>>CORRECT!
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