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If a foreign visitor has only one day to spend in Korea
I want to recommend to visit Gyeongju.
Gyeongju has many tradional places like Cheonmachong Ancient Tomb, Cheomseongdae.
And Recently many restaurant and coffee shop opened. You can enjoy delicious foods and pretty interior.
Conveninently, There is many hotels so You can easily look for lodging.
강사 첨삭
1. If a foreign visitor has only one day to spend in Korea I want to recommend to visit Gyeongju.
>>If a foreign visitor has only one day to spend in Korea, I want to recommend him or her to visit Gyeongju.
2. Gyeongju has many tradional places like Cheonmachong Ancient Tomb, Cheomseongdae.
>>Gyeongju has many traditional places like Cheonmachong Ancient Tomb and Cheomseongdae.
3. And Recently many restaurant and coffee shop opened.
>>And, recently, many restaurants and coffee shops opened.
4. You can enjoy delicious foods and pretty interior.
>>You can enjoy delicious foods and pretty interiors.
5. Conveninently, There is many hotels so You can easily look for lodging.
>>Conveniently, there are many hotels ,so, you can easily look for lodging.
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