homework
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Homework : Are there any holidays in your country that involve drinking lots of alcohol? Please explain your answer.
I think it depends on family tradition and personality. In my family we hardly drink on holidays but I heard some family of my friend drink a lot on New Year’s Day in lunar calendar and Korean Thanksgiving Day. Speaking of personality my brother in law usually drinks a lot. he always drinks when my family gather together.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]-Gi!
I\'m surprised that you don\'t drink much. That\'s good to hear.
I\'m surprised that you don\'t drink much. That\'s good to hear.
I don\'t think there are many men who don\'t drink much these days, but here you go- hehehe.
By the way, thank you for taking the time to do your homework. I appreciate your effort and honesty.
I think it depends on family tradition and personality.
>>CORRECT!
In my family we hardly drink on holidays but I heard some family of my friend drink a lot on New Year’s Day in lunar calendar and Korean Thanksgiving Day.
>>CORRECT!
OR: My family rarely drinks on holidays, but I heard that some of my friends drink a lot on Lunar New Year\'s Day and Thanksgiving Day in Korea.
Speaking of personality my brother in law usually drinks a lot.
>>CORRECT!
he always drinks when my family gather together.
>>He always drinks when our family gets together.
I think it depends on family tradition and personality.
>>CORRECT!
In my family we hardly drink on holidays but I heard some family of my friend drink a lot on New Year’s Day in lunar calendar and Korean Thanksgiving Day.
>>CORRECT!
OR: My family rarely drinks on holidays, but I heard that some of my friends drink a lot on Lunar New Year\'s Day and Thanksgiving Day in Korea.
Speaking of personality my brother in law usually drinks a lot.
>>CORRECT!
he always drinks when my family gather together.
>>He always drinks when our family gets together.
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