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Are afterschool programs a good way to reduce violence and gangs?
Afterschool programs can reduce violence and gangs.
This method can pay more attention to students who are having a hard time studying.
There are also disadvantages.
The time spent with parents can be reduced.
So the distribution of time is important.
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After school programs can reduce violence and gangs.
>>correct
This method can pay more attention to students who are having a hard time studying.
This method can pay more attention to students who are having a hard time studying.
>>This can help the students pay more attention to their studies if they are having a hard time.
There are also disadvantages.
There are also disadvantages.
>>correct
The time spent with parents can be reduced.
The time spent with parents can be reduced.
>>correct
So the distribution of time is important.
So the distribution of time is important.
>>correct
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