Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Does watching TV make you stressed?
Yes. I do.
I get stressed if I only broadcast the same program on TV.
But it is good that TV shows interesting contents.
These days, I enjoy watching documentaries about babies.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I am glad that you are able find interesting to watch despite the overflow of the broadcast on COVID 19. Keep yourself entertained. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
Yes. I do.
>>CORRECT!
I get stressed if I only broadcast the same program on TV.
I get stressed if I only broadcast the same program on TV.
>>I get stressed if I see the same broadcast on TV.
But it is good that TV shows interesting contents.
But it is good that TV shows interesting contents.
>>But it is good to watch TV shows with interesting contents.
These days, I enjoy watching documentaries about babies.
These days, I enjoy watching documentaries about babies.
>>CORRECT
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