Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) What are basic children\'s rights?
The children\'s basic right are to eat, sleep and play.
But there are times when it can\'t be kept.
because there are many unprotected children.
Society must uphold the basic rights of children.
That way, the children\'s basic rights are protected at home.
Punishment should also be carried out if the children basic rights to fails.
Because this is the same as abuse.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Children are very vulnerable and should be proctected. Everyone has a duty to do so.~~T.Dee
The children\'s basic right are to eat, sleep and play.
>>CORRECT!
But there are times when it can\'t be kept.
But there are times when it can\'t be kept.
>>But there are times when it can\'t be observed.
because there are many unprotected children.
because there are many unprotected children.
>>It;s because there are many unprotected children.
Society must uphold the basic rights of children.
Society must uphold the basic rights of children.
>>CORRECT!
That way, the children\'s basic rights are protected at home.
That way, the children\'s basic rights are protected at home.
>>CORRECT!
Punishment should also be carried out if the children basic rights to fails.
Punishment should also be carried out if the children basic rights to fails.
>>Punishment should also be carried out if the children\'s basic rights are not protected.
Because this is the same as abuse.
Because this is the same as abuse.
>>It\'s because it is the sames as abusing them.
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